Monday, November 30, 2015

Spooky forest



We are using images to help us to create powerful sentences.

Here are some of my best powerful sentences.

It looks misty because the sun is coming down onto the end of the tree. It looks like it is floating. It looks like half of the tree is gone. It smells like fear is coming near!. It sounds like a dragon roaring with the trees howling as the wind rushes through. It is dark with a little bit of daylight. I nervously stare with shaking legs through the gaps of the trees. Dead trees howl as I walk through the freaky forest. It's cold like frozen ice as I walk through the freezing forest.    

1 comment:

  1. Well done bailey, that's a good piece of writing, I love the use of lots of descriptive words it really tells me a story about the picture and and I can imagine how it would be.
    Well done keep you the good writing.
    Love mummy

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